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Re: Need advice, worldbuilding
Hey, the animal doesn't have to be big! Think about sea/river transport, maybe a net with an artificial bait for fishes, that could accelerate a ship. This would work nicely, ...
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Re: Need me to read yours?
Hey! I did Megan's piece,pretty cool! @Rascal I really don't know where to start, I guess I have to check out the previous chapters. Sorry I couldn't find enough time ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Need advice, worldbuilding
technology is generally how it is because that's been found to be the best way to do things That's exactly what I was thinking. When it comes to cars, there's ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: How to avoid info dump in fantasy world
Hi, I'm currently working on this fantasy story, and is having trouble describing some things without giving too much info in a single chapter. The 'world' I'm trying to describe ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Hurting -- Chapter One
Hello. Well, I can't really try to fix the grammars since 3 people beat me to it. Maybe just a few that they may left out. So, here we go! ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Need me to read yours?
I will gladly review your work, just give me the location and I'll be there! Will review any stories, especially fiction. I can't do prose, lyrics, and plays(is there such ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
This forum looks neat, I think I'll enjoy my time lurking around here =) Hello everyone! Umm...never seem to figure out how to make a good introduction... So I'm Crouching ...
May 28, 2009
